Now I’ve been to myspace.
The most important change I’d make would be to start where my readers are- broke, and tease them into reading more, like Aaron did with the Homepage blog. All prospects’ favorite station is WIIFM (What’s In It For ME?).
If MySpace is still mostly broke teenagers, you may do better by “selling” them the action of joining a mailing list for more information, bookmarking your page on Digg, StumbleUpon, etc., which can bring in traffic from other sites and the search engines.
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Hope this helps. If not, just ask.