Er… just my opinion of course, but… no 🙂
However you do make it clear that in this case you are asking for funding for… something. Such clarification is a step in the right direction 🙂
Now, if that’s the case, what are you asking funding for? And where do you hope the funding will come from? Are you asking for government support? Private support? Any support you can get?
If instead you want more of a PSA about the possibilities of aneutronic fusion as opposed to current energy sources then your script should go down another path, I think.
