Reply To: T-shirt designers unite and take over

[Brian H]

Aeronaut wrote:

I like the web site. The headline grates on my grammatical sense of matched tenses. Can’t it be “What If Tomorrow Is Different?”

Edit:
I really didn’t emphasize how much I like the website. It is a great short essay for generating excitement.

Glad you like it, Jowabea. 🙂

My friends on a marketing forum said “Huh?”, so it looks like I need to make sure that anybody “gets it” in the first 5 seconds. There’s also a few new bullet points playing on the idea of a two ton, 7 by 7 by 10 foot 5MW power plant in a 53 foot semi trailer rated for 15 ton payloads, as well as shorting aluminum futures. ;-P

edit- just overhauled the headline and aimed it at savvy, aggressive investors and executives. Now its even shorter and sweeter.

17 words is shorter than 5?

Edit: his, hers, its;
he’s, she’s, it’s.
“unless its an electric utility.” –> “unless it’s an electric utility.”
“Its designed specifically” –> “It’s designed specifically”

I think your optimism is squeezing the dimensions quite a bit; the housing is going to be about small garage size, and I would presume that would be a part of most shipped units.

Your calculations mention the installed cost, but nothing about the FF cost/price of generated power per kwh. Therefore your savings calculations make no sense.